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The Running of Lyra: Competition (Part 3) by DarrianMH The Running of Lyra: Competition (Part 3) by DarrianMH
Part 1: darrianmh.deviantart.com/art/T…
Part 2: darrianmh.deviantart.com/art/T…

And then kinky stuff happened. :iconspikehappiestplz:
I still don't really like the ending, but it's not my story, so I'll roll with it.

....So yeah. I finished this series. Took me some time, eh?
I sure hope it was worth the wait. Was it? You tell me in the comments. :)
I don't really know what to write here any more, honestly. I thought I would write more. Anyway!
I would like to give a big big thanks to ~BlackKiriin who has helped me out quite a bit
with the whole coloring thing and colored a few panels of characters for me.
And of course I want to thank all of my watchers for being so patient. A whole year of wait is honestly too much. :D
(I guess most of you have forgotten about this anyway, but to those who didn't: 5 internets for you. Make it 6 if you think Lyra is best pony.)

Oh, I almost forgot: The biggest thanks of course goes out to ~Lurks-no-More for writing this short story in the first place.
You may have already figured it out, but I really really enjoyed reading it. So much that I decided to visualize it.
And it was one hell of a journey, but in the end, it was really really fun.

So if you read through the whole sixty panels AND this description: Your attention span is really really big. Just sayin'.

THANK YOU ALL :D
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:iconfutaba2:
Futaba2 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
makes me want to re-watch the episode where AJ and Rainbow ran their running of the leaves race.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
i know, right? :D
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:iconmistersandmancan:
MisterSandmanCan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  New member
Absolutely adorable.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
:')
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:iconscotchnvl:
ScotchNvl Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2]  Bon Bon you suggestive little fox, you.
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sasho-shirokami Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I enjoyed it very much !
I hope that my cheering can be sent to you  safely, from Japan !
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i recieved it, so sending successful i guess?
thanks man! ;D
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:iconvirhemies:
Virhemies Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconrainbowdashsqueeplz: i love this
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:iconwaveofart:
WaveofArt Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
:iconrainbowdashOMGplz:
... One sec...
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hue?
dat icon fail tho.
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:iconwaveofart:
WaveofArt Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
yeah I know! XD
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:iconwaveofart:
WaveofArt Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Damnet never mind! Anyway this was AWESOME! Luvv ur work!
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:iconjbrenham:
jbrenham Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
Thank you so much for making and posting this comic. It's every bit as good as the fic itself.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconfly-by-night-lyds:
Fly-by-Night-Lyds Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
This gets all my smiles and warm hearted D'awwws!  This is how I tend to think of the Lyra/Bonbon pairing, as a lovingly weird but supportive team, and it's why they're one of my favourites! :)
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WPCEO Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Good things come to those who wait, apparently! This story is really cute, and your visualization is very cool! I can't quite put my hoof on it, but there's something really unique about your style. I like it!
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thanks man!
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:iconjahalus:
jahalus Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
5 stars!
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
1 million stars for your comment!
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't like the ending either. Excuse me while I go take a shower. With lye soap.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
interesting to read all three comments in a row. :P
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your art is good, make no mistake. The shipping, though...its like a worm (or octopus tentacle) in a apple.
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DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
you wont see anyshipping anywhere else in my gallery, besides that one pic i was basically forced into that was kin da saucy. :I
cause i dont have any interest in that stuff anyway. but this wasnt my story and the reason i wanted to make this was the running part, so i kinda have to do the rest too, if i like it as much as the race or not.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll give it a look.
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:iconringshif7er:
Ringshif7er Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student General Artist
THAT MUG.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.
AND I APPROVE.

...

also the comic was fantastic; thanks for a brilliant read :)
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for your comment man :D
AND YES. BEWARE ZEE MUG.
CAPTEIN MIGHT WANT IT BACK.
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:iconringshif7er:
Ringshif7er Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student General Artist
If RA had its own brohoof-type-thing, I would give you one.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
it only has rainbow dash toothpaste, close enough.
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:iconschneelocke:
schneelocke Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
That was simply beautiful. With a partner like Bon Bon, you can really do anything and everything; good on Lyra for doing what she wanted, no matter what others might say, and good on Bon Bon for supporting her.

I love both the story and the art. Definitely a favorite! And my apologies for not writing more; you'd deserve it, but I'm as shot right now as Lyra after that race.
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DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconmoppypuppy:
MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Lyra was helpless and couldn't move.

Bon Bon takes advantage.

Continuous sex. ALL THE TIME.
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DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awgawdnoooo
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:iconmoppypuppy:
MoppyPuppy Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
agawdyessss
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:icontigreanpony:
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Daaaw that was cute.
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Neat- although I never realized Lyra and Bon-Bon were an item; I thought their living together was purely platonic. How interesting...
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Its basically everyones own decision how to look at them, what they are for each other. Personally, I mostly just think of them as friends.
But in this story they are partners, yeah. But then again, not my story, I just made it into a comic.
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ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Good story, but the simple fact that a horses back legs are incapable of bending the proper way to facilitate walking, kinda spoils it for me.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Horses are also incapable of having green, blue and purple manes. :P
Logic is overrated.
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:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
True, but there are accepted logical inconsistencies within the show, and this is not one of them.
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DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Not clearly stated yet, so I'll roll with my own logic. Works until proven by show not to. I haven't seen any proof against it yet. Plus fanon and canon are two different things to me. :'P
But that doesnt mean it is like that and nothing else, everyone'll have their own opinion about that.
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:iconcentaur71:
Centaur71 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I'm with you on this; We Pegasisters (and Bronies) take a BIG dump on logic in favor of Ponyism
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
its a cartoon. do you really need any logic in there?
we cant just assume the same physics apply in their world. they have magic, for gods sake :D
something over there is definitively different, so why not this too.
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saeth-kaleanae Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Huh... I feel I've seen this before. I know I read part one, but... Was this perhaps based n a fanfic or something
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DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hm. that's interesting...did someone else finish my series? :I
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:iconsaeth-kaleanae:
saeth-kaleanae Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Seems very unlikely. Much more likely I just recall the previous two pages.
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OR you've just read the original fanfic. www.deviantart.com/art/The-Run…
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Mariachiman Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
I love how Derpy's number says Leet: 1337
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:icondarrianmh:
DarrianMH Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i couldnt resist.
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Mariachiman Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
707
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Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
This is nice. I like it!
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